- Claim: young adults need to take action against increasing prices for college education by joining a PAC. She states an exception to her claim in a sarcastic way at the beginning of the essay in paragraph 2. This would be also using character and emotion as a form of appeal because she is stating it in a very sarcastic or funny way.
- Reason: standing up against those who make the changes in college education price is an effective way to make change.
- Evidence: the students who sat in the admissions office at Yale got them to change their policies
- Reason: students should organize a state by state movement
- Evidence: each state is different so students should organize the best movement particular to their specific needs
- Reason: students should join a PAC to have one united voice for their beliefs
- Evidence: VA21 has taken many actions and they are starting to be taken seriously
- A warrant to her reasons is that she believes that taking physical action by joining a group is the only way make change.
- A rebuttal she states is that people may not want to side with VA21 because they are receiving donations from different banks, therefore; they won’t take action against unfair credit card marketing.
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