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- claim: young people need to stand up for themselves in front of authority for fairer education costs
- reason: the government is charging more and more for basic services like education and there should be a movement for fairer conditions
- evidence: there was a small movement from Yale students to lower the financial aid policy which even more students joined in on and eventually they prevailed. This shows that unified movement is the way to get things done.
- reason: student loan debt is growing and changes have to be made to fix it
- evidence: acts should be passed to prevent students from borrowing too much money and the national association of student financial aid agreed with him.
- evidence: students in other countries stand up for themselves and get things done so american college students should follow their example
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